How I improved my Korean writing

λˆ„κ°€ 도와쀀 κ±°μ˜ˆμš”?! “Who helped you write this?!” Those were the words greeting meΒ asΒ I picked up the phone when my LP called to give me feedback on an essay I had sent to him. μ œκ°€ μ•Œμ•„μ„œ μΌκ±°λ“ μš”!!”No one, I wrote this alone!!” I exclaimed,Β not knowing whether I shouldΒ feel offended at hisΒ accusation that I would “cheat” on my Korean essay or to take his disbelief as a compliment. He then went on to tell me that my Korean writing had become much more natural and that there was hardly anything for him to correct in my latest essay. “It used to be very clumsy and awkward, but this time it’s really good!” As always he’s a textbookΒ example of a brutally honest Korean guy practicing the concept of 병주고 μ•½μ£Όλ‹€, which means first saying something mildly insulting and then following it up by a compliment.Β I’m obviously used to his style by now and never even blinked when he went all μ„ μƒλ‹˜ on me and continued to scold me for not taking care of my health (I was having the flu at the time), not eating properly (“What are you doing eating a salad?! You need meat to get stronger, you know! Why don’t you have some μ‚Όκ²Ήμ‚΄??”), and then a final scolding for not having told him that I was sick in the first place. (“Why didn’t you say anything?!! I worry about you!”) I was quiteΒ confused as to who was the older one of us (it’s me by the way) when he was finally done lecturing me! This phone call reallyΒ made for some excellent Korean listening practice. However, in terms of culture, all this is just a classic example of Korean μ •, the very special and far-reaching Korean friendly love. Always rest assured that a Korean who comments on your eating habits is a Korean who truly cares for you.

After having digressed into my health and eating habits, and finally being convinced that I really didn’t cheat, he actually wanted to know how I had my improved my writing, so I thought I’d share this here with you too. It’s very simple really: I just started reading, reading, and reading. I’m reading in Korean all through the day and just like that I have felt my writing flow much more naturally. The more you read in your target language, the more words and expressions are stored in your brain. And the more you read the more you pay attention to the details of the language. Each language has its own set of fixed expressions and standard ways of writing, and Korean is no different. Compared to English, which is a very direct language, Korean is very vague and indirect. Take for instance the English expression “who knew?”. It’s something I often find myself saying whenever I learn of something for the first time, like “We have an ATM next to the parking lot? Who knew?”. In Korean a similar expression would be μ΄λŸ°Β κ²ƒμ„ μ•„λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ μ–΄λ”” μžˆμ„κΉŒμš”? (lit. where is a person who knows this?). In English this sounds fairly cumbersome, but nonetheless it’s a standardΒ Korean expression. In a similar way, Koreans write “it seems that” as “κ²ƒμœΌλ‘œ 보인닀”. In general it has taken me some time to feel comfortable using the “둜” particle when I’m writing, but I feel I’ve come to really embrace it thereby enabling myselfΒ to write very versatile sentences that sound naturally Korean. Afterall, 둜 can mean several things spanningΒ “through”, “with”, “to”, “by”, and “as”. More than enough for some initial confusion, but I guess all it took was a lot of reading to get it right. Finally, a very good Korean phrase that instantly gives your writing a quality lift is κ·ΈλŸΌμ—λ„ λΆˆκ΅¬ν•˜κ³  meaning “despite this” or “nonetheless”.

I’ll post my essay on North Korea’s export of propaganda statues to African dictators here below. I didn’t choose the topic (nor did I cheat!). The essay is based on an article which I was assigned by my LP:

εŒ— μ΅œλŒ€ν•œ μˆ˜μΆœν’ˆμ€ β€™κ±°λŒ€ 동상’ … BBC ”아프리카 μˆ˜μΆœν•΄ 수천만 λ‹¬λŸ¬ λ²Œμ–΄β€

λΆν•œμ€ μ„Έκ³„μ μœΌλ‘œ μ•Œλ €μ§„ λ‚˜λΌμ΄μ§€λ§Œ λΆν•œμ˜ κ°€μž₯ 인기가 λ§Žμ€ μ œν’ˆμ€ λ°”λ‘œ κ±°λŒ€ν•œΒ λ™μƒμ΄λΌλŠ” 것을 μ•„λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ μ–΄λ”” μžˆμ„κΉŒ? λΆν•œμ΄λΌκ³  ν•˜λ©΄ 주둜 λ¨Όμ € λ– μ˜¬λ¦¬λŠ” 것은 β€™λ…μž¬β€™, ’곡산’,Β β€™μ „μŸβ€™ λ“± 같은 단어이닀. λΆν•œμ€ 수좜ꡭ으둜 λ³΄λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒλ“€μ΄ λ§Žμ§€ μ•ŠλŠ” 것 κ°™λ‹€. κ·ΈλŸΌμ—λ„ λΆˆκ΅¬ν•˜κ³ Β μ˜κ΅­ BBCμ—μ„œ λ‚˜μ˜¨ 방상 λ”°λ₯΄λ©΄ λΆν•œμ˜ μ΅œλŒ€ μˆ˜μΆœν””μ€ 동상과 선전물이라고 ν•œλ‹€.Β λΆν•œμ—μ„œ 그런 κ±°λŒ€ν•œ 동상이 μžˆλŠ”μ§€ λͺ¨λ“  μ‚¬λžŒλ“€μ΄ 잘 μ•Œκ³  μžˆμ§€λ§Œ, 그런 μ œν’ˆ κ·Έμ•Όλ§λ‘œ λ‹€λ₯Έ λ‚˜λΌλ‘œΒ μˆ˜μΆœλœλ‹€λŠ” 사싀을 μ•Œκ²Œ 된 μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ μ—†λŠ”κ°€ (μ—†μ§€ μ•Šμ„κΉŒ) μ‹Άλ‹€. 이 동상은 주둜 μ•„ν”„λ¦¬μΉ΄λ‘œ 수좜되고 특히 μ„Έλ„€κ°ˆ, μ§λ°”λΈŒμ›¨, λͺ¨μž λΉ„크 같은 λ‚˜λΌμ—μ„œ λΆν•œμ‚° λ™μƒκ³ΌΒ μ„ μ „λ¬Όμ˜ 인기가 κ°€μž₯ λ§Žλ‹€κ³  ν•œλ‹€. 이 λ‚˜λΌλ“€μ€ λ°”λ‘œ λΆν•œμ²˜λŸΌ λ…μž¬λΌμ„œ 그런 μ œν’ˆμ΄ ν•„μš”ν•œ 것 κ°™λ‹€.Β λ‚˜λŠ” 처음 이 기사λ₯Ό μ½μ—ˆμ„ λ•Œ 많이 λ†€λž¬λ‹€. μ™œλƒν•˜λ©΄ κ·Έλ•ŒκΉŒμ§€ 항상 λΆν•œμ„ κ°€λ‚œν•˜κ³  λΆˆμŒν•œ λ‚˜λΌλ‘œΒ λ³΄μ•˜λ‹€. 그리고 무엇보닀, λΆν•œμ€ κ³ λ¦½ν•œ λ‚˜λΌλ‘œμ„œ ꡭ제적인 무역을 μ ˆλŒ€λ‘œ μ•ˆ ν•˜λŠ” ꡭ가인 쀄 μ•Œμ•˜λ‹€.Β κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‚˜ 싀은 λ°˜λŒ€μΈ 것 κ°™λ‹€. κ²Œλ‹€κ°€ λΆν•œμ€ 이 ꡭ제적인 λ¬΄μ—­μœΌλ‘œ μΈν•˜μ—¬ λ§Žμ€ λˆμ„ 벌 μˆ˜λ„ μžˆλŠ”Β κ²ƒμ–΄λ‘œ 보인닀.

 

 

13 responses to “How I improved my Korean writing”

  1. I can’t find any grammatical error in this blog post. Who helped you write it? γ…Žγ…Žγ…Žγ…Ž

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    1. Haha! Believe it or not but I wrote that one on my own too ^^

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  2. That’s right!
    I’ve done this for English and I felt a little more comfortable after. It’s all linked to practice. πŸ™‚

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    1. True! Read more and write better. So simple and yet I often have to remind myself πŸ™‚

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  3. Reading has SO many benefits! (Thank you dear god for creating me as a person who loves to read, to begin with, haha!) It looks really good Sofie!

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    1. γ…Žγ…Žγ…Ž couldn’t agree more. Thanks for your kind words πŸ™‚

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  4. This post reminds me that I should start reading Korean books again. And also start writing diary in Korean. I started watching Descendants of he Sun because of your post and I love the drama.

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    1. So happy you like it. I’m already waiting on the edge of my seat for tonight’s episode πŸ™‚

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  5. Hey Sofie,
    I don’t know if my question will be relevant asked here but I decided to try!
    I will finally meet my LP for the first time (yay I finally found someone :D) soon and as I haven’t experienced it before nor have I had penpals, I was wondering if you had tips/advices/ideas to give me that would be cool for a first meeting with a LP. πŸ™‚
    Plus, I am only a beginner for now so I don’t know what to do.
    I guess we will set something adapted to us and will discuss about this together but I would feel less “stressed” if I came up with some ideas in mind.
    Thank you in avance for reading me!

    PS : I hope that you hadn’t posted something about this earlier otherwise you will only repeat things, I’m sorry!

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    1. Congratulations on finding an LP! And excellent question! I wrote a blog post about how I was going about meetings with my awesome LP, before he went back to Korea.

      Inspiration for getting the most out of your language exchange

      As you can see from my recent blog posts, we still keep the exchange going through phone/skype but obviously we both miss meeting for real. (I can’t wait to move to Korea in August!)

      In addition to what I wrote in my previous blog post we also came up with “video day” and “newspaper day” where we would send each other newspaper articles and youtube videos in English/Korean so that we always had new topics to discuss. I highly recommend this as well, since it allows you to branch out on new topics and vocabulary. You also learn a great deal about each other when you have to share your views on different topics, so there’s definitely a cultural advantage there as well. From time to time we would also assign each other a topic to present for one another. At one point I for instance gave a 10-minute presentation in Korean about my job.

      I hope this gives you some insipiration! I wish you a wonderful language exchange! πŸ™‚

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      1. Thank you very much!
        I’ll go and read your article.
        Now, I just have to wait and not feel stressed because I can say little in Korean. ^^

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  6. AWESOME WRITING! Your writing is totally better than mine. You would totally get a 5 or 6 even if you took the TOPIK again. Reading this inspires me to start reading (never really have out of frustration tbh…)

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    1. Haha! thanks πŸ™‚ I’m really astonished myself at how effective reading in Korean truly is. Just choose a book you like and have fun with it. I also find that it sometimes helps to read a Korean book which I’ve already read in English. Maybe that might work for you too πŸ™‚

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